Do you desire a new beginning?
I died on the battlefield.
A death I did not want.
And the last breath that coldly scattered…
But then I opened my eyes again.
Moreover, I have returned to the time 10 years ago.
10 years of time and a given opportunity again.
As I wish, I will control the world!
And … I’m out. This story had such potential. After about 30 chapters, 5/5 easily. And then it started going downhill. The awful trope of “turn MC stupid to create dramatic tension” shows up. The whole relationship with Ibi is forced and poorly done (and clearly motivated by an intent at avoiding any grooming claims). But chapter 85 was the capper – author turns MC into a pathetic simp.
And … I’m out. This story had such potential. After about 30 chapters, 5/5 easily. And then it started going downhill. The awful trope of “turn MC stupid to create dramatic tension” shows up. The whole relationship with Ibi is forced and poorly done (and clearly motivated by an intent at avoiding any grooming claims). But chapter 85 was the capper – author turns MC into a pathetic simp.
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